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Everyone, say hello (again) to your favorite ditzy water mage! What's that, don't have a favorite ditzy water mage? Well now is a great time to start =P

Borea is part of a tribe of water mages, so she has great, inborn powers. But alas, she can be quite the blonde from time to time, thus screwing up spells. And in case anyone was wondering, "Shplish!" is the sound of a failed spell =) Dunno what spell she was trying to cast, but it sure had some spectacular results! I wonder when she'll notice XD

This is my first true foray into WG art, so lemme know how I did please! I personally love how it turned out, although I had a bit of trouble with her form. There's always room for improvement, though, and I plan on doing so :D PS out

Borea, and all awesomeness associated with her belong to :iconfrozen-water:

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:iconwhip-it-out:
Ooooh, I like this one! You did really really well, honey. <3

I love her face, and you did do well on her form.

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:iconjudasrockinpriest:
XD *splish*. I think you did great with the WG, a lot of folks go overboard with the rolls methinks. This looks perfect :).

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:iconfrozen-water:
Very nice, Plasma! I absolutely adore this, and I'm glad that you like Borea enough to take her into your ranks of characters, and I do have to say I love what you did with her ^^

First off, great job with the belly, You didn't overdo it with the rolls, and it spills out enough to not have that inflated look to it. It is big enough though to have that "stomach fold" near the navel, where the flab folds in on itself a bit... I think you know what I mean. I like how her skirt got pressed out by her legs like that, it's a nice touch. Her expression is priceless, and you did a great job getting things down.

A few things you may want to improve on if you continue down this avenue more, is to widen her arms a bit more. They still have that "thin" look to them, they need to be a bit thicker. Not horribley so, but some more girth would be better. Also, I think her face, while nearly flawless, could be filled out a slight amount more, and maybe play with the chin, if you want to. She probably would have the start of another at this point. Also, maybe a little more emphasis on the curves of her legs, otherwise great!

Also... she's got a great ass ^^

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:iconpuffyseraph:
I just like how her skirt rides up just a bit on her hips. Gives a great curve to her midsection and really accents the picture nicely. =^_^=

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:iconmanta-wolfe:
very nice, but is this really your first wg pic? what about all of the other pics in your gallery?
:iconpureivel:
I love how you've portrayed the belly being dragged down by gravity. It's gorgeous.

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:iconpuppypump101:
I would suggest alil' more of the arms' and the face fat, but otherwise, Great Borea!
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Was she s' pposed to have a skirt?

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:iconj-panda:
hehe cute i love that, tummies but the rest staying thin. nice one man

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:iconstuffedbellylover:
It is nice!!!

Best wishes and happy Easter Days!

Chris

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